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"Signs from the World" is the teaching delivered on Nov. 7, 2008, not "Signs" ? See citation under "Destiny"
 
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And "The New Message for the Impoverished & Oppressed," April 18, 2008, not "Message for the Impoverished & Oppressed," April 18, 2008
 
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s.v. "Religion"
 
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Does this quote need antecedent for the pronoun? i.e., "[The Allies of Humanity] come ..."
 
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:"We come not to incite fear but to provoke a sense of responsibility.”
 
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::::The Allies of Humanity Book One, Second Briefing
 
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Too oblique without more explanation?  
 
:“Your life is given to '''fulfillment'''. That is why you suffer.”   
 
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'''Will, I was wrong about italics interfering with links to titles. Not an issue.''' Very likely I drew the wrong conclusion when I miscapitalized ''Wisdom from The Greater Community''. Or else it had to do with the mistake I was making putting the marks for italics inside the brackets for the link, corrected thankfully by TA's example (such beautiful and accurate work!).
 
'''Will, I was wrong about italics interfering with links to titles. Not an issue.''' Very likely I drew the wrong conclusion when I miscapitalized ''Wisdom from The Greater Community''. Or else it had to do with the mistake I was making putting the marks for italics inside the brackets for the link, corrected thankfully by TA's example (such beautiful and accurate work!).
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Where "The Greater Community" appears in a title, I'm capitalizing ''The''  to conform with the page title for ''Wisdom from ...'', taking this as a stylistic preference from NKL/Society.
 
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This quotation has the force of prophecy--oh, but for the New Message!--but I'm guessing the tone to be polemical, i.e., an observation made by other interested parties:
 
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:“The rich indulge themselves endlessly—in their hobbies, their passions and their plays while the rest of the world sinks into despair, poverty and degradation. Surely, this cannot be a world that will survive as a free race in the universe. Surely, this is a race that will not have the collective wisdom to restrain its activities and to prepare for its future. Surely, this will be an easy prize for those who use cunning and guile to achieve their goals.”
 
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::::The Consequence of Revelation, September 4, 2011</small>
 
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Delete (from '''Humanity''')or add a little context or interpolation? (i.e., extend the quote or insert within brackets a short "[other races might say]" It looks o.k. on the page now, adjacent to a paragraph with a similar theme.
 
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Thinking about page titles,''Relationship'', ''Relationships'', and ''Relationships of higher purpose'': keep the three titles, and use the first for the nature of relationship (to any and everything) and the second perhaps for involvements and attachments with other people?
 

Revision as of 00:30, 16 December 2011

Too oblique without more explanation?

“Your life is given to fulfillment. That is why you suffer.”
Wisdom from the Greater Community Volume One, Chapter 10

Will, I was wrong about italics interfering with links to titles. Not an issue. Very likely I drew the wrong conclusion when I miscapitalized Wisdom from The Greater Community. Or else it had to do with the mistake I was making putting the marks for italics inside the brackets for the link, corrected thankfully by TA's example (such beautiful and accurate work!).

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